hi everybody!!
This day I will tell you about a great blog of a classmate called Isaura, this blog have five post where she tell us about her life. This blog is nice to read because his desing is simple and the black letters/white background let you read whitout problems. Also you can find three photos of her in Puerto Fuy and in a school where she teach a many childrens.
The post that I recommend is Persa Bio Bio, there she tell us about the giant market in Santiago, what kind of things you can find and how this place changes and become a big pulgas market. I choose this post because there she tell us very good in 317 words how this place is and where is located. Also I think that is a good dastination for some weekend, you must to go!
Here is the link of Isaura's bolg: http://isauraen.blogspot.cl/
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Today i(NN) I choose "Persa Bio Bio" to be (WE) my favorite place in Santiago. Persa Bio-Bio its(p) a gigant(Sp) market in Santiago where you can buy and sell whatever you want, normally people talks about this places as a "Flea Market" id(p) like to think that is the coolest and largest Pulgas market in the country, o(Sp) i(p) dont (p) know, (sm) the world jajaja.
I really like this place,(sm) is located in Franklin station of the subway, but(NN) specifically in Placer street, to my dismay, its(p) just the perfect name. This area its(p) in a neighborhood full of storehouses and wholesales, some of them are empty so some days(WE) (im (p) not shure(Sp)) and Saturdays like(NN) at 10 until 11 AM this place changes and become this(WW) big Pulgas market whit(Sp) a thousen(Sp) of stands.
I dont(p) go constantly, but(NN) i(p) like to go at least one or twice a year, (sm) I dont(p) go to buy anithing(Sp) (sm) just (sm) to look because there is a passage o space just for collectors full of antiques. You can see, fourniture(Sp), comics, games, old tecnology,(sm) clothes. This really can be a journey for a day, also you have one area that sells tipical chilean food to licking your fingers. This cant(p) be (sm) the haven so(WW) two things to considerate if one day the lector go(WE), its(p) like a risky place in Santiago, i(p) dont(p) know, (sm) example for a turist, and are (NN) some hours that(NN) (SM) is really full of people, its (p) very heavy. I like to go with friends, my couple or my family, i(p) have to admit that the best its(p) go whit(Sp) the family because there you have the chance to listens stories about one objet(Sp) o(Sp) antique and the life of yours relatives. The last time I went alone :(, (sm) just trying to sell (sm) someone a dead smarphone, indeed that works (WE) (sm) so with the money i(p) go to buy(WT) a Sopaipilla.
WE: WORG EXPRESSION
WW: WRONG WORD
WT: WRONG TENSE
WF: WRONG FORM
SM: SOMETHING MISSING
NN: NOT NEEDED
WO: WORD ORDER
SP: SPELLING
P: PUNCTUATION
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